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Opening Image
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Theme stated
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Set up
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Catalyst
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Debate
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Break into two
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"B" story
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Fun and games
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Midpoint
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Bad guys close in
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All is lost
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Dark night of the soul
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Break into three
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Finale
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Final image
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Proactive Scene
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Goal
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Conflict
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Disaster
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Reactive Scene
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Reaction
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Dilemma
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Decision
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Motivation
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External and objective
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Reaction
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Internal and subjective
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Feeling
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“A bolt of raw adrenaline shot through Jack’s veins.” You show this first, because it happens almost instantly.
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Reflex
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“He jerked his rifle to his shoulder . . .” You show this second, as a result of the fear. An instinctive result that requires no conscious thought.
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Rational Action and Speech
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“. . . sighted on the tiger’s heart, and squeezed the trigger. ‘Die, you bastard!'” You put this last, when Jack has had time to think and act in a rational way. He pulls the trigger, a rational response to the danger. He speaks, a rational expression of his intense emotional reaction.
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Get rid of "that"
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Avoid other filler words
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Eliminate adverbs and adjectives
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Show, don't tell
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Use metaphors and similes
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Practice dialog
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Stop talking to your reader
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No more business jargon
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No infinitives or gerunds (eliminate -ing)
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Avoid nonsexist language
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Use specific examples, not vague generic ideas
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Hook
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Scene 1 or 2
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2
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Plot Turn 1
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Scene 12
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4
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Pinch 1
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Scene 20, 21, 22
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6
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Midpoint
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Scene 30
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3
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Pinch 2
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Scene 36,37
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7
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Plot Turn 2
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Scene 45
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5
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Resolution
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1
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Remove the character as acting
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Remove "sense" words
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Make the action the subject of the sentence
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Break down the verb to add variety to your sentences
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Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.
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Never us a long word where a short one will do.
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If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
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Never use the passive where you can use the active.
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Never use a foreign phrase, scientific word, or jargon if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
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Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.
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You must write
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Finish what you start
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You must refrain from rewriting, except to editorial order
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You must put your story on the market
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You must keep it on the market until it has sold
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Start working on something else
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"The first thing a writer must write is a thick skin." - @elmwriting
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"Before you can write anything, you have to notice something." - John Irving
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""(It's) like death... something you do on your own & nobody can help you." - @neilhimself
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"Start writing, no matter what. The water does not flow until the faucet is turned on" - Louis L'Amour
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"Get bored. Only when our mind stops being constantly engaged will story machines in our subconscious get to work." - @mightymur
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Cheatography n. The art of mapping complex subjects into clear, instantly navigable reference guides.